A moment of breath

By VampireMandy

 Life:
She gasps for air
as light floods into view
and coldness grips her skin
a cry comes out of her mouth
and a moment of Aww!
enters the hospital room
with mother and baby laying on the bed
with tears in her eyes
this is a moment of breath

Death:
She coughs, wheezes,and gaps for air
smell of roses enter the hospital room
and cry's come like a wave
and tears fall from her husband's eyes
as she takes her last breath
this is a moment of breath

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Copyright 2012 VampireMandy
Published on Monday, July 16, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Squishy On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Squishy (32)By person wrote:

    I love this poem , very well ... Thank you.

  • haunted On Tuesday, July 17, 2012, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    very nice poem, i enjoyed it. thanks for this!

  • VampireMandy On Tuesday, July 17, 2012, VampireMandy (20)By person wrote:

    Thanks hun I'm glad you liked it.


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