I leave you with your thoughts

By VampireMandy

 I leave you with your weary thoughts, 
I leave you on the floor laying in your own despair, 
I leave you where you lay because,
you keep your shadows to near to your heart,
I leave it alone because the more I try to console you
the worst I make you.
I can not make your choices for you, 
but you need not fret for I will hold you tell your demons have left.

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Copyright 2012 VampireMandy
Published on Saturday, May 12, 2012.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

My darkest moments are my brightest moments.
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  • A former member wrote: INteresting... just as you are... Bravo! (:

  • VampireMandy On Saturday, May 19, 2012, VampireMandy (20)By person wrote:

    Thanks hun.

  • A former member wrote: Well written and a good read welcome to DP

  • VampireMandy On Saturday, May 12, 2012, VampireMandy (20)By person wrote:

    Thank you.

  • A former member wrote: Wow this is really good, great meter, and everything just fits in so well, it reminds me of the song the Last Time by Within Temptation

  • VampireMandy On Saturday, May 12, 2012, VampireMandy (20)By person wrote:

    Thank you hun.


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