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It lingers once more
By VampireMandy
Lay with me
in my bed of sorrows
as our dreams linger
on the edge of loneliness
for when we wake
it lingers
once more
leaving our arms empty
and with a felling that we
well never meat
for we only now each other in our dreams
The lingering taste of a lovers dream is so sweet till you wake
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Copyright 2012 VampireMandy
Author's Note:
The lingering taste of a lovers dream.Comments on "It lingers once more"
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A former member wrote:
i like the feeling of the emptiness...
almost like a de-ja-voo in reverse.
verrryyy skilled
i would replace the word sorrows with "pain" or "hurt"
the word sorrow has reached a cliche status.
but still works in this poem.
i like this alot
check out mine?
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On Monday, May 14, 2012, VampireMandy
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wrote:
Thank you hun I was thinking on using pain or hurt instead of sorrows so I may change that, and I wouldn't mind to take time to look at your work too.
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