It lingers once more

By VampireMandy

Lay with me
in my bed of sorrows
as our dreams linger
on the edge of loneliness
for when we wake
it lingers once more
leaving our arms empty
and with a felling that we well never meat
for we only now each other in our dreams
 
The lingering taste of a lovers dream is so sweet till you wake 

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Copyright 2012 VampireMandy
Published on Monday, May 14, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

The lingering taste of a lovers dream.
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  • A former member wrote: i like the feeling of the emptiness... almost like a de-ja-voo in reverse. verrryyy skilled i would replace the word sorrows with "pain" or "hurt" the word sorrow has reached a cliche status. but still works in this poem. i like this alot check out mine?

  • VampireMandy On Monday, May 14, 2012, VampireMandy (20)By person wrote:

    Thank you hun I was thinking on using pain or hurt instead of sorrows so I may change that, and I wouldn't mind to take time to look at your work too.


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