short & bittersweet XVII
By RhymeBound
while all the world be shouting:
"now stop and quit, abstain!"
hope in my ear be whispering:
"stand up and try again..."
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Copyright 2012 RhymeBound
Published on Monday, February 20, 2012.
Filed under: "Structured" and
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
An old saying with just a rhyme thrown in...Awards
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On Thursday, December 27, 2018, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
An uplifting and wonderful gem of a piece. Congrats on POTD!
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On Tuesday, October 23, 2012, King_Crazy_Dave
(45) wrote:
If you cant eat the punches you're already dead.
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On Friday, May 4, 2012, Undertaker
(32) wrote:
never give up, no matter who is shouting! keep that hope, strive and push. Good write my friend
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On Tuesday, February 28, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Most appreciative of the hopeful message, thanks and so well done.
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On Monday, February 20, 2012, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
Sometimes one just has to say FTW! Nice to see you post again. Miss chatting with you.
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A former member wrote:
A nice well written maxim with layers of truth! Epic!
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A former member wrote:
Wow.... This says so much... and it's only four lines long... I loved it. Kinda reminds me of something I did once.