Oh Spider, Oh Spider.
By TheCreepIngCrow
in present depth.
The DEPTH of your presence.
lures her into you.
You LURE her into
your trap.
A spider hidden behind your web.
HIDING so she won't see your internal evil.
You blow smoke into her eyes.
You PITIFUL bastard.
She is blinded from her impending calamity.
Your BLACK eyes, so deep, distract her.
Slowly wrapping your evil around her.
Webbing her, paralyzing
her, DRUGGING her.
She is not afraid, but at
peace.
Your LIPS to her, she experiences release.
You bastard, you stole her life.
And DEVOURED her
soul.
Comments on "Oh Spider, Oh Spider."
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On Friday, December 9, 2011, haunted
(837) wrote:
very cool writing! i love spiders, but i think this one kind of fucked you up! they can be tricky!
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On Friday, December 9, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Kinda lost the wordplay from the eighth line onward but overall very taut and curiously hypnotic, thanks.