gaining the storm

By RhymeBound

the gale sworn my muse
and kissed by the rain,
the storm mine to lose
as well as to gain...

~ RhymeBound

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Copyright 2011 RhymeBound
Published on Friday, December 2, 2011.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Saturday, January 9, 2016, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    This was a fun piece to read, I enjoyed it. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • PoetessDarkly On Friday, September 21, 2012, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    lovely pen. you are very talented

  • A former member wrote: very nice i like all your work so far...

  • A former member wrote: a tempest to have and to hold if chosen, i find this quite enigmatic,but i wouldnt expect anything else from you. thank you for entering lee.

  • rosemaiden On Friday, December 2, 2011, rosemaiden (180)By person wrote:

    oh I love how so little words can bring so much!....amazing

  • Devilish On Friday, December 2, 2011, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Wow Rhyme.. I had yet to see you say anything for a while... SO glad you did... Lovley!! Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Well, look at who's writing again. I really like the last two lines...simultaneous loss & gain. I think I know what you mean. Well done, RB. Hope you write some more. Scholar

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