A Heart of Cobwebs
By TheCreepIngCrow
I looked for love inside
Myself.
Instead I found cobwebs.
Broken and
Disoriented.
My heart would not tick right.
My soul was shadowed,
As the night,
And their windows dulled,
No longer bright.
Loveless, loveless.
My hands clenched.
My smile
feigned.
All
love exhausted.
My heart's been pinched.
Comments on "A Heart of Cobwebs"
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On Thursday, March 12, 2015, Nimue44
(289) wrote:
Oh, insomnia, the ultimate thief of notions, light and hearts... Wow.
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A former member wrote:
Awesome and amazing... (:
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On Monday, June 25, 2012, TheCreepIngCrow
(35) wrote:
Thank-you!
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On Saturday, November 26, 2011, TheCreepIngCrow
(35) wrote:
Thanks for the comments! I am so glad that you enjoyed this one!
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A former member wrote:
"My soul was shadowed as the night" ...I like that :) very nice.
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On Saturday, November 26, 2011, dwells
(4177) wrote:
"pinched" as in British slang I would guess? (stolen perhaps). Wondering about soul having multiple windows too - how cool (windows to the soul). Really enjoyed this piece and apologize for the criticality, thanks.