The Weeping Pains

By TheCreepIngCrow

 The weeping pains
It scrapes the ears
HE'S DEAD HE'S DEAD
Crow screams in fear
Past beyond
If your still here
We see a shadow
The shadow we fear
He is reflecting off the tombstone
And crow
Crow is screeching
TAKE THEM ALONG
BE GONE! BE GONE!
It brings me sorrow to know
Picked out eyes have chosen not to see
Crows screeching does
Let the dead go free.

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Copyright 2011 TheCreepIngCrow
Published on Thursday, November 24, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TheCreepIngCrow On Saturday, November 26, 2011, TheCreepIngCrow (35)By person wrote:

    thanks, that's exactly what I was aiming for!

  • dwells On Thursday, November 24, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Something elemental and otherworldly in this offering, thanks. Very original and unique indeed!

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