Unexpected Affection

By WoundsLikeStars

Moisture and pressure
Awkward embrace
Heart, speeding
Necks, craning
Endorphins, careening
Who thought the evening would ever end like this?

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Copyright 2011 WoundsLikeStars
Published on Monday, November 21, 2011.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

I think a sex-obsessed culture can often forget the beauty, innocence, and absolute excitement of a first kiss, especially when said kiss is unexpected.
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  • A former member wrote: mmm yes. kisses are quite enjoyable and so is this. thank you for your entry

  • Devilish On Friday, November 25, 2011, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    Awsome!! Never fails... Scholar

  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 24, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (274)By person wrote:

    Thanks for sharing, good stuff >=E

  • dwells On Monday, November 21, 2011, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    Has to start with something physical, although wondering about the one heart (only) speeding. Is this the promise of things to come, or the kiss-off perhaps? Interesting proposition for the post-chivalry generation, thanks. (THEY used to knock on the door, or even worse just honk - but now call on their cell phone to say "I'm out front". Sorry if I digress.

  • WoundsLikeStars On Monday, November 21, 2011, WoundsLikeStars (56)By person wrote:

    The singular heart indicates that only I can speak for my own. I'd hope her heart would race as well, however.

  • dwells On Monday, November 21, 2011, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    Gotcha, with the first person point of view thanks WLS.

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