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Possession
By WoundsLikeStars
Possession is, "to be invaded."
Invasion is, "to be penetrated."
Possession is, "to own."
And in this moment, you will be invaded,
penetrated, and owned.
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Copyright 2011 WoundsLikeStars
Author's Note:
"Possession" doesn't have to be something that happens to you. Sometimes, it's something you do.Comments on "Possession"
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On Sunday, November 13, 2011, dwells
(4284)
wrote:
I would suggest perhaps "subjugated" in the place of "to own" (or be owned). Interesting, thanks.
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On Sunday, November 13, 2011, WoundsLikeStars
(56) wrote:
Thanks, Dwells. As always, that's a great tip. Thanks a lot for always offering constructive criticism. Honestly, I'm not confident enough to do that, but your suggestions are always good.
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On Monday, November 14, 2011, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Completely understood, and thanks for the encouragement.
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On Sunday, November 13, 2011, namelessmadi
(36) wrote:
I agree, this was enjoyable to read, very good. :)
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On Sunday, November 13, 2011, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Very true...Very true... It doesn't have to be something that happens to you... I love that...
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