Dust

By Demosthenes

Swallowing the dust
that you
p...
.o..
..u.
...r
d...
.o..
..w.
...n
m.
.y
t.....
.h....
..r...
...o..
....a.
.....t
has always been
my favorite
reason
to hate you.

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Published on Sunday, July 6, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Dust"

A former member wrote: very cool!
A former member wrote: really original, good write
A former member wrote: The structure of this piece reminded me of the way sand flows...it gracefully winds its way down in a twirly fashion...exquisite piece.
On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

concrete enough for me......well done.......urban
On Saturday, July 12, 2003, Blood of Winter (296) wrote:

I can think of many things that are that dust, what a write.
On Monday, July 7, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240) wrote:

This is such a fun piece. What a visual stimulant.
On Sunday, July 6, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (434) wrote:

Short. precise and yet vast....Great write...~VelvetT~
On Sunday, July 6, 2003, nell (270) wrote:

although this could have so many many meanings and you think it's nonsense i like it, the way you wrote it is really kewl=)
A former member wrote: i went to rehab for white dust going up my nose and down my throat, this reminds me of it, Great write. :-*
On Sunday, July 6, 2003, Demosthenes (155) wrote:

i realize after reading that comment that it really sounds like thats what its about. funny how people i dont know understand me more than i understand myself. -B
On Sunday, July 6, 2003, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

yes yes yes! i feel it.. i know it... i am it.. and i taste the dust like so many crypts.