Complicated Cerebral Cesspool

By MikeShank1989

Tainting the water with the question, confusion ensues
Psyche projected in UHF while you're fiending for views
Every extremists actions panhandle for flashes from Canons
Obsession in a deathgrip with aequitas; while hate is tossed, faith is abandoned
Causing tremors beneath the keys every time I type a tempest
You run your fingers beneath my lines counting caps like a dentist
An addict to fame plagerizing my verb and adjective game
I birthed the style you've used for your Counterfeit fad-lib fame
While the mediums mention malevolent messages manufactured to mask the misson
Our children are sobbing through clouds of smoke, in 4th world county conditions
In place of Jiffy Pop, the piff is hot and burning in the kitchen
While you're slinging that poison and stressin the stacks you'll make from moving bricks
Your child discovered your hypo's in your sock drawers, he's tracking up his arm pits with needle sticks
Did you imagine paper chasin would end like this? 

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Copyright 2011 MikeShank1989
Published on Thursday, June 30, 2011.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Felt odd about this one.
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  • carlosjackal On Friday, July 1, 2011, carlosjackal (3019)By person wrote:

    I was drawn in by the title and the piece was a hard-hitting feast of language. Very well done, indeed!

  • MikeShank1989 On Friday, July 1, 2011, MikeShank1989 (93)By person wrote:

    Thank you so much sir!

  • Devilish On Thursday, June 30, 2011, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Fuck me! Ok WoW! Scholar

  • MikeShank1989 On Friday, July 1, 2011, MikeShank1989 (93)By person wrote:

    I wasn't sure how I felt about this piece. I'm overjoyed that you appreciated it.

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