Complicated Cerebral Cesspool
By MikeShank1989
Tainting the water with the question, confusion ensues
Psyche projected
in UHF while you're fiending for views
Every extremists actions panhandle
for flashes from Canons
Obsession in a deathgrip with aequitas; while
hate is tossed, faith is abandoned
Causing tremors beneath the keys
every time I type a tempest
You run your fingers beneath my lines
counting caps like a dentist
An addict to fame plagerizing my verb
and adjective game
I birthed the style you've used for your Counterfeit
fad-lib fame
While the mediums mention malevolent messages manufactured
to mask the misson
Our children are sobbing through clouds of smoke,
in 4th world county conditions
In place of Jiffy Pop, the piff is
hot and burning in the kitchen
While you're slinging that poison
and stressin the stacks you'll make from moving bricks
Your child
discovered your hypo's in your sock drawers, he's tracking up his arm
pits with needle sticks
Did you imagine paper chasin would end like
this?
Author's Note:
Felt odd about this one.Comments on "Complicated Cerebral Cesspool"
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On Friday, July 1, 2011, carlosjackal
(3019) wrote:
I was drawn in by the title and the piece was a hard-hitting feast of language. Very well done, indeed!
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On Friday, July 1, 2011, MikeShank1989
(93) wrote:
Thank you so much sir!
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On Thursday, June 30, 2011, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Fuck me! Ok WoW!
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On Friday, July 1, 2011, MikeShank1989
(93) wrote:
I wasn't sure how I felt about this piece. I'm overjoyed that you appreciated it.