Silent Stalkers Reality Check

By Poetic Warlock

Silent Stalker,now that the first round is done,
Dark Poetry knows already who's won!
So,tell me what good would it possibly do
For you to even show up,and go for round two!
You would not even be a worthy sparring partner for me,
Since you do not have the stamina to make it past round three!
But,if you showed up to fight in round four,
I would punish you some more,knocking you to the floor!
There is no way you would ever survive,
So I would take a step back,toying with you in round Five!
I would throw a jab,a hook,and an upper cut into the mix,
And watch you stumble around the ring in round Six!
And before you close your eyes to get a glimpse of heaven,
I would continue to give you hell throughout round seven!
I would abuse you just to prove that I am one of the greats,
Battering and beating you up some more in round eight!
I would savor each and every moment in round nine,
As I proclaim to the whole site that victory is mine!
Prior to delivering the knock out blow in round ten,
I would whisper two words in your ear, and those words are.."I Win!!"

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Copyright 2011 Poetic Warlock
Published on Thursday, May 26, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Jedi MindFuck On Thursday, May 26, 2011, Jedi MindFuck (49)By person wrote:

    this 'poem' makes the West Side Story soundtrack seem more akin to gangster rap.

  • Kurashu On Thursday, May 26, 2011, Kurashu (29)By person wrote:

    As juvenile as this is, it's better than 90% of "the drivel meandering around" this site.

  • lupus tenebrae On Thursday, May 26, 2011, lupus tenebrae (872)By person wrote:

    So, do you actually plan these ahead of time, or are they spontaneous? You must have headaches quite frequently, with such drivel meandering about in your skull. Scholar

  • Malice In Wonderland On Thursday, May 26, 2011, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    haha, that just made me happy. thank you...:D Scholar

  • A former member wrote: *facepalm* im embarrassed for you, wow. Scholar

  • SilentStalker On Thursday, May 26, 2011, SilentStalker (1066)By person wrote:

    ...this doesn't even deserve a rebuttal...you've practically owned yourself with lame... Scholar

  • Malice In Wonderland On Thursday, May 26, 2011, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    haha, Darun, this is scary...guess you should run for cover... or the just find nearest trashcan... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Your rhyme scheme and structure are particularly juvenile. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: you act like its fuckin shakespear man the guy did a good job Scholar

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