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bullet holes
By GoldenLotus
words are our weapons
and
we didn't choose our ammunition wisely
allowing fear to
control feelings
planting seeds of evil weeds
pollinating thoughts
with infectious disease
i was foolish to think
your love
was an antidote
that with you
this was something
i could control
that we
were stronger
together
that i
would
forever
never
say good bye
you wrapped your bullets
with shattered promises
loaded your gun
with lies
it's my turn
to pull the trigger
blow my fucking brains out
all over the paper
let bleeding hearts lie
my body's drained
my veins empty
no love remains
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A former member wrote:
nice conceit, you extend the metaphor well, causes pause.... when words fail.... they tend to explode into shrapnel, perhaps.... like hollow points hehe... on impact. Tis a shame, what this presents... all the best, and thanks for the levels of meaning.
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On Monday, January 10, 2011, jjrh187
(6)
wrote:
I liked this. Sounds like something I would say lol. Nice work.
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On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, GoldenLotus
(47) wrote:
thanks a bunch!! ^_^
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