surprise farewell

By alex herewane

she had every right to ask

why did you laugh

I couldn't tell her because I was happy

and I did'nt know why

she who could endure

levels of darkness, I could never understand

she said you don't have to go home

but you can't stay here

got up and opened the door

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Published on Friday, January 7, 2011. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "surprise farewell"

A former member wrote: oh alex, I really love this, you always have a piece for exactly how I feel and this is getting really spooky.. but you are saving me with your words, and that's something you have to know. this is like vibrations of everything I've laboured watching nonstop over the last few days.
On Friday, January 7, 2011, carlosjackal (2785) wrote:

There was a humour, a truth and a resonance to this piece that I really liked. Great stuff :) -Carl
On Friday, January 7, 2011, DarkDruidess (313) wrote:

Cross roads are dangerous places littered with mines waiting to blow your battered body to bits....ahhh, that is soooo what I don't want...peace please...nicely written...*bows*