Nihil Obstat

By Crush_With_Eyeliner

We pushed through
until dawn but
not really.
It's noon
in the world
of nightmares.
Troops push on
their retreat;
wet from the
lack of rain
and growing thin from
abundance and
waste.

We push on-:
our symbolic, drunken
gestures.
Dressed in
cerement,
lavishly celebrating
this last of
days.

Nihil Obstat; (nothing is taken away)
Nothing hinders; (nothing is given)

Nothing hinders on
this dream;
it's noon
in the world
of nightmares.
A soft noon;
a casualty of
equinoctial memory.

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Copyright 2010 Crush_With_Eyeliner
Published on Wednesday, December 8, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, December 8, 2010, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    A choking limbo..No direction and confusion is hell. Excellent piece.

  • ubiquitoussoul On Wednesday, December 8, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343)By person wrote:

    This big dark nightmare it seems.. where nothing actually weighted..real.. everything seems to be moving in slow motion..backwards..contradictions in here used very well .. unique thought to pen..

  • A former member wrote: oh im so glad you are back, i like this change of style, the length. we get a more vivid picture here. love the use of contradictions, love the idea of dreams. please write more :)

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