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Exhale; Begin
By Crush_With_Eyeliner
I could build
no proud towers
in this grey light.
If there
are
stars they
are hidden.
The book
of Corinthians
is a lie.
The moon is
low and
waiting;
a long
breath
exhaled.
Begin
anew,
unwashed
and
unsheathed.
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Copyright 2010 Crush_With_Eyeliner
Published on Saturday, November 6, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Exhale; Begin"
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On Wednesday, May 11, 2011, Virgils Vigil
(74)
wrote:
This poem brings about some interesting thoughts and imagery. I really like the structure.
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A former member wrote:
oooo...i need to stifle the commentary here; 'corinthians, eh? love, love, love.......i DO like the write, it has a wee bit of pent.up.breathability in it.....but as token 'saint' and 'mad', i have mixed theories and heartfelts on the corinthians line, good sir. :}
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A former member wrote:
should say i DO like the write
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On Saturday, November 6, 2010, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Refreshing.
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A former member wrote:
felt like a rebirth, to me, one without cleansing.... without lies..... but um... the unsheathed... just made me think of Shade's warrior, and I chuckled despite knowing otherwise. excellent tone, imagery... novel rebirth.
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A former member wrote:
VERY impressive.--Draven
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