Redhead

I saw
you the
moment
you entered
the room.

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Published on Monday, November 1, 2010. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Redhead"

On Tuesday, November 2, 2010, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

Brilliant :)
A former member wrote: I like the way the red is book-ended... as if the center, the core of this is consumed by the sight of her..... red, red... red........head....lips......
On Tuesday, November 2, 2010, Crush_With_Eyeliner (47) wrote:

Hmmm...I wondered if the bookend would work...it's hard to conceive of these things with just a pen and paper... i also like your elipses...but I should tell you I stopped at the lips...
A former member wrote: i always love it when they have me seeing red!
A former member wrote: I think your 'witch' lips will have me seeing red every night for a month, sexy.
On Tuesday, November 2, 2010, Crush_With_Eyeliner (47) wrote:

With the current picture ains that comment is just soooo creepy...
A former member wrote: heh.... just think what she could have done.... I'm lovin any likeness of those lips.