Redhead

By Crush_With_Eyeliner

I saw
you the
moment
you entered
the room.


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Copyright 2010 Crush_With_Eyeliner
Published on Monday, November 1, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, November 2, 2010, carlosjackal (3010)By person wrote:

    Brilliant :)

  • A former member wrote: I like the way the red is book-ended... as if the center, the core of this is consumed by the sight of her..... red, red... red........head....lips......

  • Crush_With_Eyeliner On Tuesday, November 2, 2010, Crush_With_Eyeliner (48)By person wrote:

    Hmmm...I wondered if the bookend would work...it's hard to conceive of these things with just a pen and paper... i also like your elipses...but I should tell you I stopped at the lips...

  • A former member wrote: i always love it when they have me seeing red!

  • A former member wrote: I think your 'witch' lips will have me seeing red every night for a month, sexy.

  • Crush_With_Eyeliner On Tuesday, November 2, 2010, Crush_With_Eyeliner (48)By person wrote:

    With the current picture ains that comment is just soooo creepy...

  • A former member wrote: heh.... just think what she could have done.... I'm lovin any likeness of those lips.

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