Let's look Again
By Miztaken4beauty
Take a look
At the life you lead.
The blood you spill,
Just
to suceed.
The friends you've lost,
The enemies you've made,
The things you do,
Just to get laid.
Then please tell me,
Who you are,
And if you're proud,
to have come so far.
And
that girl,
Who warms your bed,
Does she know,
What's in
your head?
But I'm gone,
from days long past,
When nights
were long,
But time flew fast.
You look for the happiness
you know is lost.
So take a look at your life,
And what it
has cost.
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Copyright 2010 Miztaken4beauty
Published on Saturday, August 21, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Let's look Again"
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A former member wrote:
Beautifully structured rhyme. Well done. =)
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A former member wrote:
i thought that it was filled with so much truth i can relate good stuff!!
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On Saturday, August 21, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(343) wrote:
This was excellent..bleeding with so much truth of the reality of many people's lives ..blunt and sad,seeing this is a part of life.."The blood you spill, Just to suceed. ".. I can see tis clearly..I can relate to some of this..Thanks for posting