Let's look Again

By Miztaken4beauty

Take a look
At the life you lead.
The blood you spill,
Just to suceed.
The friends you've lost,
The enemies you've made,
The things you do,
Just to get laid.
Then please tell me,
Who you are,
And if you're proud,
to have come so far.
And that girl,
Who warms your bed,
Does she know,
What's in your head?
But I'm gone,
from days long past,
When nights were long,
But time flew fast.
You look for the happiness
you know is lost.
So take a look at your life,
And what it has cost.

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Copyright 2010 Miztaken4beauty
Published on Saturday, August 21, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Beautifully structured rhyme. Well done. =)

  • A former member wrote: i thought that it was filled with so much truth i can relate good stuff!!

  • ubiquitoussoul On Saturday, August 21, 2010, ubiquitoussoul (343)By person wrote:

    This was excellent..bleeding with so much truth of the reality of many people's lives ..blunt and sad,seeing this is a part of life.."The blood you spill, Just to suceed. ".. I can see tis clearly..I can relate to some of this..Thanks for posting

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