solo son horas...

By Spiritus_Frumenti

We wonder about what it truly means
If it isn’t just a change
A transition into another place
Where the only measure of time
Are in the things we could still remember 

We wonder about what it would be
If it isn’t just another life
Something that is parallel to our dreams
Where the ones we have loved and lost
May not even really be there 

We wonder about how it would feel
If it wouldn’t just be a peaceful desolation
If the pain we carried would still be there
Quiet and heavy enough,
For God to notice and walk away… 

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Copyright 2010 Spiritus_Frumenti
Published on Saturday, July 17, 2010.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • maddin foxxxy On Saturday, November 5, 2011, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    I feel this, specially the 5 last lines! well done

  • sIo On Saturday, July 17, 2010, sIo (898)By person wrote:

    jesus this is like a train wreck on wheels just being placed into your hands. one by one.

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