My Dark Garden
By Wiccad
While walking through my dark garden
I hear a voice and whisper
"pardon?"
I listen close but no reply
Was it the wind passing
by?
I bend down to pull at a thistle
I swear to god I heard a
whistle
"Who's there?" I say, louder than before
"This whispering
is becoming quite a bore"
Just then I think I hear a twig snap
I strain to see but in darkness I'm wrapped
The air grows still....and
then a crack
I feel a push into my back
I spin around to catch
the trickster
Thinking that this has to be my sister
Then out
of the corner of my eye
I see a shadow pass me by
I grow cold
and my hair stands straight
Who is here? And what's my fate?
I
drop my flowers and run to the gate
Looking back I see it wait.....
Is it foe or is it friend?
The feelings I have are not pretend
I was left feeling like this was the end
I stumble and trip over
a stone
I think I may have broken a bone
My vision blurs and
my side is stinging
I feel something warm pouring out of me
My
head hurts and my ears are ringing
Oh my god I feel like I'm sinking
In my dark garden I now join in their singing
Comments on "My Dark Garden"
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On Wednesday, August 4, 2010, Meadowhawk
(160) wrote:
Haunting piece. Nice flow.
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On Tuesday, July 13, 2010, alex herewane
(149) wrote:
What a great write, you captured me and then the twist at the end, thats talent. good stuff.
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On Monday, July 12, 2010, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
a different sort of twist in that this moves you though the telling effortlessly, catches your imagination then leaves you pondering at the end... the flow was great, as Eye said, also... nicely done