My Dark Garden

By Wiccad

 While walking through my dark garden
I hear a voice and whisper "pardon?"
I listen close but no reply
Was it the wind passing by?
I bend down to pull at a thistle
I swear to god I heard a whistle
"Who's there?" I say, louder than before
"This whispering is becoming quite a bore"
Just then I think I hear a twig snap
I strain to see but in darkness I'm wrapped
The air grows still....and then a crack
I feel a push into my back
I spin around to catch the trickster
Thinking that this has to be my sister
Then out of the corner of my eye
I see a shadow pass me by
I grow cold and my hair stands straight
Who is here? And what's my fate?
I drop my flowers and run to the gate
Looking back I see it wait.....
Is it foe or is it friend?
The feelings I have are not pretend
I was left feeling like this was the end
I stumble and trip over a stone
I think I may have broken a bone
My vision blurs and my side is stinging
I feel something warm pouring out of me
My head hurts and my ears are ringing
Oh my god I feel like I'm sinking
In my dark garden I now join in their singing




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Copyright 2010 Wiccad
Published on Saturday, July 10, 2010.     Filed under: "Spiritual" and "Poetry"
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  • Meadowhawk On Wednesday, August 4, 2010, Meadowhawk (160)By person wrote:

    Haunting piece. Nice flow.

  • alex herewane On Tuesday, July 13, 2010, alex herewane (149)By person wrote:

    What a great write, you captured me and then the twist at the end, thats talent. good stuff.

  • NikesRain On Monday, July 12, 2010, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    a different sort of twist in that this moves you though the telling effortlessly, catches your imagination then leaves you pondering at the end... the flow was great, as Eye said, also... nicely done

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