You said hello.

By IAmNorge

Hopeless and lost
Slowly falling apart
And there in my failing world
Through all the secrets and pain
You said hello.

You found me
When I had lost so much
So close to giving up
With a single roll of the die
Through my words you found me.

Your a friend seemingly so far
In this world of pain and despair
Your a world all your own
And now in life so hopeless before
I close my mind, and breath fresh air.

I may never meet you
See you in the flesh and bone
But through every smile
And words so beautifully true
I have renewed hope for love out there.

If men are from Jupiter,
And women from Venus,
I'll venture somewhere new...
And find hope within this.
(you)

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Copyright 2010 IAmNorge
Published on Tuesday, June 15, 2010.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

For someone who has helped me more then they could know, thank you.
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  • A former member wrote: Beautifully done my friend. :)

  • lupus tenebrae On Saturday, June 19, 2010, lupus tenebrae (872)By person wrote:

    That was amazing, reminded me of my good friend, and though we sort of parted ways, she still made a lasting impact on my life, well done, thanks for sharing. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: this is lovely...it's always such a blessing to find people like this..silver linings on Life's dark clouds :) Scholar

  • insideout On Tuesday, June 15, 2010, insideout (47)By person wrote:

    This is beautiful. Such longing and desire.

  • IAmNorge On Tuesday, June 15, 2010, IAmNorge (39)By person wrote:

    Thank you, its for someone who I recently met, a friend I hope to have for a long time, she really is a world all her own. (:

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