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you wanted to play
By Disciple_Of_Christ
i was happy with you even after i learn the truth
i told you,
your past is in the past it can stay there
because all i care about
is the love we share
or should i say shared?
since you threw
it away
or to you was it just a game
is that why i am your
play
thing?
my heart finally felt love
now its filled with
pain
and its strange i never thought you could hurt me this way
i guess
i wanted love and you wanted to play
we been friends since
we
were five
so i never thought you would hurt me this way
and
today
I'm putting the past away
your just a sad memory on a bad day
an why shouldn't it be that way
you the fool who wanted to play
when you had a guy who loved you in every single way
but
like
I've already said i wanted love and she wanted to play
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A former member wrote:
i bet she will regret it later.. i loved you poem
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On Friday, September 28, 2012, maxstrife
(19)
wrote:
i love this poem it's so deep, and the pain is vivid it cries out just how much it hurts to be played. well done truly a poem worthy to be put in the spotlight.
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A former member wrote:
I really enjoyed the poem, very great play on words. It is also sad, owever it is still beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
I love the way you wrote this peom. You could have just said fuck love but you didn't. You wrote a amazing peom about it.
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On Friday, June 24, 2011, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Like I famous for saying... Fuck love! Capture a bomb ass visual (mine being a hostage situation) and masterbate to it... What a goood nut it will be!...lol... Nice poem!
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On Thursday, July 29, 2010, Riven Waker
(323) wrote:
a very heartfelt and sincere work - expressed with clever and profound verse - nicely done
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A former member wrote:
Reminds me of a song by Foreigner............. -->http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SRsUZRaSSkc
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On Monday, July 26, 2010, Gray Vision
(425) wrote:
Just keep being you, your heart and intentions keep them true and you'll find the one you're looking for in due time. She'll most likely look back at the relationship she shared with you and realise what a good thing she threw away. Great write bud, you take care now and thank you for sharing =)
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On Sunday, June 13, 2010, Organized_Chaos
(9) wrote:
ive went through something like this before. its not easy and somewhat infuriating. Nice wright.
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A former member wrote:
Trust and love, sometimes good, sometimes bad...can relate...
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A former member wrote:
i feel deep pain and agony in your words
very straight forward
i am sure you felt better after unleashing
your darkness:)
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