Comments by maxstrife
- "A lot of the time i write with how i feel at that moment, like this poem i wrote because i feel that no one truly sees me, they can't see the doubts i have or the pain i feel.
And it's not just how it is with my friends, but my family too. no one in my family sees me ore cares...and its sort of left me seeing things in shades of grey where there is nothing to look forward to.
Other times stuff just comes to me and in my own head and it doesn't reflect on my emotions...I feel the poem itself should be the main priority. think too much about the title you loose the feel for the words that are meant to come out and be expressed...i generally name my poems by things that i have mentioned in it.
like this one i mentioned how i write because no one understands me so i mentioned pen in it. everyone has their own styles and own way of writing poetry, some like to do it visually by setting up a scenario and explaining it bit by bit, others use raw emotions and takes it from there. & thank you for the complement"
Posted by maxstrife on "The pen is mightier than the knife" by maxstrife
- "i write a lot i am trying to write a novel, im more of a writer than a reader there are just so few series i can get into."
Posted by maxstrife on "A caged muse" by maxstrife
- "thanks, writing comes from emotion, a lot of the time i just feel horrible and if i dont feel that than there is nothing and then there is no muse which is just as bad. "
Posted by maxstrife on "A caged muse" by maxstrife
- "thank you that means a lot to me, writing is the only thing i have the only thing that keeps me going i don't know what i would do without it. "
Posted by maxstrife on "A caged muse" by maxstrife
- "i doubt he would be jealous of me symbol, but yeah i know jealousy and envy is bad, but it's a lot harder to overcome especially when the things you want is the things you feel you should have and i know its the very definition of the word...i guess i am just having a hard time explaining myself tonight lol"
Posted by maxstrife on "Photograph" by maxstrife
- "awww this is so nice it's adorable i like it, the way its written its so gives me the smitten kitten vibes well done "
Posted by maxstrife on "What I Wanna Be" by Nehema
- "Its an interesting poem, the pay you used, its sort of wild too gives the impression your ready to get into trouble."
Posted by maxstrife on "Hell To Pay" by Huey Lewis
- "i love this poem it's so deep, and the pain is vivid it cries out just how much it hurts to be played.
well done truly a poem worthy to be put in the spotlight."
Posted by maxstrife on "you wanted to play" by Disciple_Of_Christ
- "I like this, the scenery for me was honestly spine tingling and i shivered a little. i could really feel the atmosphere of the scenery. it's so dark and alluring well done to you northstar."
Posted by maxstrife on "Famine" by Northstar
