The new whale Part 1
By Joey
Let's all see the story, of a told tale. Of a man, and
a whale.
Stormy sea's of a tridents lunge, blast upon this mans
only hunch.
Of a demon, a aquatic beast under the sea.
Ripping apart beasts, people, anything it sees.
and for revenge,
for a ravaged leg.
This man seeks aquatic blood to spill.
Thrashing about, a wooden beast pushes.
into reaches
of demons, of a target of a hatred-
filled man.
wabbling,
tilting, like a child learning to walk.
impeaded by a wooden
leg, refusing to let go.
Untill this demon is dead, he shall
cease to live.
the beast was large, and a fearsome sight.
Swimming through the water, a large white sight
Bleack
in nature, anger in passtion
it swims to its own, bleeding from
his own.
The spear bleeds his back, swimming rips his skin.
White is fading to red, as the demon mans spear, drives deeper
into it's snow.
And for revenge, a tasteless leg is all it had
to show.
Raging in pain, empty in hunger.
This being,
this whale.
Of pale white and pasture.
Swims
tword a beast, of wood and of steak.
To feed on the feast, of
a beast of flesh and meat.
And as we speak, as we attempt to
seek.
This mind of a creature, light nor dark.
The
captain Ahab rests, ready to fight.
Night falls, moon
lights, and ahab starts this night.
ship rocking, shipmates
sleeping, a slumber eternal keeping.
He hobbles to his drawr,
and finds a .24.
A small gun, a puny thing.
And fires
it.
A hole in the cabon smokes, as the captain starts
to stroke the table.
He's heard a sound, a wave, a rush.
He's heard his torment, his anger
No longer his little
hush.
EVERYONE OUT! EVRYONE SHOUT! SHOOT THAT FUCKTHIGN THING TILL FOREVER!
A dead casket, burst into life. Crewmen rushed as worker ants to seek
out this blind order.
Cannons are armed, and guns are stocked, as
well as anything else, possible to be cocked.
The captain stood
there, thinking with a old broken hand.
A ruined life, and pain
of hell.
Remembering blood gushing, from his stumped legs swell.
all cause of that whale, that white foolish thing.
Just
for fishing, for trying to fish. to find something to fish.
Posidens anger erupted, and the ship splinterd like a toothpic.
No rhymes need, for this small bit. Except the story. Which might make
you sick.
Whales need not known to be smart, of deadly, nor
anything else.
But there's places, where maces replace traces
of flowers.
Here revenge is two-fold, and a simple story, ends
here, retold:
The boat broke, cracked, and broken under
a scream of hell.
The ship, seemed alive, as it's undersea planks
ripped out from it like hairs.
RIP, CREEK, RIP, CREEEK, CREEEEEEEEEEEEEEK!
Author's Note:
Off the top of my head. sorry if it's not that great.Comments on "The new whale Part 1"
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On Wednesday, May 12, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Nice retell of Moby Dick, you should really run this through the spell checker, or at the very least re-read several times after you have posted... nice imagery, thanks for sharing