Scars of a Memory
By Miztaken4beauty
You're just another memory,
That I want to waste away.
Many fragile
promises,
that never survived the day.
So strong, so weak, I'm
glass.
Bend me until I shatter.
Fight to be my universe,
and
the only thing that matters.
Like acid dripped across my skin,
I guess the damage is done.
But let the ocean take the stars,
You already took the sun.
So in my world the light is gone,
and
I wander in the dark.
But it's a blessing in disguise,
because
I'll never see the marks.
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Copyright 2010 Miztaken4beauty
Published on Sunday, April 4, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Very nicely orchestrated poem. What a nice read. I'm very impressed with your work. Keep it up.
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful.. "But let the ocean take the stars, you already took the sun".. That part hit me truly in heart.. As I always say, love can be sometimes a mean bastard.. I hope you are getting better now.. :)
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A former member wrote:
Sadness
And
Beauty
Have
Many
Forms
Many
Of
Them
The
Same.
Do
Not
Wander
In
The
Dark
For
Long
Though
Face
The
Marks
That
Are
Left
Behind.
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On Monday, April 5, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(192) wrote:
Really good post. And I agree with cloudydaze... favorite lines "But let the ocean take the stars, You already took the sun." Sadness at its finest.
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On Monday, April 5, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(343) wrote:
Wow...This left me in awe..worded so beautifully..the visuals and strength in this are remarkable..Thanks for the share..Certainly a piece I will revisit in the future.
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On Sunday, April 4, 2010, Dark Wing
(51) wrote:
Like the way the words just roll off the tongue while reading it, very good write. ~Crow
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On Sunday, April 4, 2010, Meadowhawk
(160) wrote:
Wonderful flow. I really like your wording. Nicely written.