Imagine

By Dreamzz

Imagine the freezing cold night the moon is gone and the stars no longer show.
Imagine the fire in the middle of the site the only thing keeping you from dying.
Imagine it slowly dying out and your body going cold.
Imagine your lips turning blue and your last breath hanging in the air.
Imagine how your black horse runs off by instinct as the vultures begin to circle.
Imagine everything going black.
Imagine a candle light in front of you in a small small room.
Imagine you running toward the candle only to see with each step it flies farther away.
Imagine that the room begins to get smaller.
Imagine that the flame begins to get larger.
Imagine that the pain is replaced with the burning feeling of rage.
Imagine that you die.
Imagine you never wake up.
Imagine everything you believed was wrong.
Imagine you were me.
Imagine what I've been through.
Imagine what I've seen.
Imagine who I am.

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Copyright 2010 Dreamzz
Published on Friday, April 2, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Wiccad On Saturday, April 3, 2010, Wiccad (124)By person wrote:

    This sounds like maybe your past life coming to bite you in the ass again through your dreams and into your work. Great job!!

  • RubyXero On Saturday, April 3, 2010, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    nice ending. I'd love to imagine who you are... very intense. I wrote a poem like this in school once. What is this style called again if you know?

  • A former member wrote: Odd yet original. That gave me a good mental picture of something I'd never thought of before. Wonderful write.

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