Blindside
By Syringe
**poem about new york**
Metallic subway trains
Pump lives
into city veins
Pulsating and cultivating
Newfound
culture
In the underground
It's a new birth
Procreating
a possibility
Beyond the payroll
I See Them All
Hungry eyes
and
Restless minds
Shutting down
on
Metrolines
Systems Standby
Subway rails
Wail in a clumsy meter
like tone-deaf siryns
yearning for attention
She will not be ignored
This concrete jungle is nothing
more
Than a
Venus flytrap fantasy
Her glamour sucks you
in
But spits you out
Just as quickly as you came
You
Are Just Another Number
to her
The Big Apple
is a
circus indeed
There is no safety net
No guarantee
Only the
strong survive
So be weary of her cracks and weeds
She
can be misleading
Just watch your step
and
Stand clear of
the closing doorsÂ
Comments on "Blindside"
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A former member wrote:
That was a very well written poem and a very accurate one also.
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On Thursday, December 31, 2009, Everlasting Gobstopper
(18) wrote:
you know, I just love the subway there is nothing more kinetic or more freeing then new york vibrant and alive even on the subway. Not that I have ever been but when I dream of the Big Apple this poem is what my dreams sound like.
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On Thursday, December 31, 2009, Riven Waker
(317) wrote:
it seems like you know this kingdom well - your highly charged language really carried me there - makes me jealous for not being one of its denizens
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On Thursday, December 31, 2009, Dilated View
(582) wrote:
Sounds like a harsh realm. I really enjoyed the imagery you used throughout. Very cool.