Blindside

By Syringe

**poem about new york**

Metallic subway trains
Pump lives
into city veins

Pulsating and cultivating
Newfound culture
In the underground

It's a new birth
Procreating a possibility
Beyond the payroll

I See Them All

Hungry eyes
and
Restless minds
Shutting down
on
Metrolines

Systems Standby

Subway rails
Wail in a clumsy meter
like tone-deaf siryns
yearning for attention

She will not be ignored

This concrete jungle is nothing more
Than a
Venus flytrap fantasy
Her glamour sucks you in
But spits you out
Just as quickly as you came

You Are Just Another Number
to her

The Big Apple
is a circus indeed
There is no safety net
No guarantee
Only the strong survive

So be weary of her cracks and weeds
She can be misleading
Just watch your step
and
Stand clear of the closing doors 

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Copyright 2009 Syringe
Published on Thursday, December 31, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: That was a very well written poem and a very accurate one also.

  • Everlasting Gobstopper On Thursday, December 31, 2009, Everlasting Gobstopper (18)By person wrote:

    you know, I just love the subway there is nothing more kinetic or more freeing then new york vibrant and alive even on the subway. Not that I have ever been but when I dream of the Big Apple this poem is what my dreams sound like.

  • Riven Waker On Thursday, December 31, 2009, Riven Waker (317)By person wrote:

    it seems like you know this kingdom well - your highly charged language really carried me there - makes me jealous for not being one of its denizens

  • Dilated View On Thursday, December 31, 2009, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    Sounds like a harsh realm. I really enjoyed the imagery you used throughout. Very cool.

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