Awake
By Midnight Phoenix
(I'm thinking about possibly using pieces of this for lyrics to a song,
but I'm not sure if any of it is in the ballpark of being "good". Please
let me know!!!)
It is the first time in my whole life I feel the warmth
It’s like the sun shines from the center of me, secretly
Under the blue sky I may be far away from the answers
But it doesn’t seem to matter to me any more
It’s finally become simple
No more waiting and waiting to die
I can wake up to another day
And wear the smile this time without the lie
It’s like a warm rain that never stops falling for me
It’s like a storm drain that channels all the tears away
A golden drop of honey on the tip of my tongue
The first passionate kiss we had when we were young
It’s finally become simple
No more waiting and waiting to die
I can wake up to another day
And wear the smile this time without the lie
I’m so glad today I could wake up knowing that
Today is the first day of the rest of my life
And I realize that the child in me lives for that
And I realize it’s ok to smile sometimes because
It’s finally become simple
No more waiting and waiting to die
I can wake up to another day
And wear the smile this time without the lie
Comments on "Awake"
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On Monday, June 23, 2003, diavolessa
(208) wrote:
I think this would make a good song. It's just beautiful! I liked it a LOT!
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On Friday, May 23, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
very great write!! left me wanting for more..."It’s finally become simple No more waiting and waiting to die I can wake up to another day And wear the smile this time without the lie "...simplicity and beuty!!!!
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On Friday, May 23, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
lyrical and fluid, words chosen and structured very well, impressed.love the feeling this one gave me...............within the realm of the "park"........
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A former member wrote:
This is very inspiring. Its nice to see someone writting about happiness.
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On Tuesday, May 27, 2003, Saint_Reaper
(203) wrote:
very inspiring indeed..
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On Friday, May 23, 2003, IceDragoness
(195) wrote:
This is how the happy days are, which is why they're so precious, This really would make an awesome song, I like it a lot ~Dawn
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On Friday, May 23, 2003, cre
(411) wrote:
I really like this ... I could feel the warm rain and taste the honey too, as I read. I needed that just then ... really good write.
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A former member wrote:
i love it!!! its.... it makes me want to write
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On Tuesday, May 27, 2003, Silent_Raven
(19) wrote:
this IS a great write, i do suggest you use some of the lines for a song (y)...*RAVEN.*