I Love You

By Shadow_Kissed5180

this is the third frigin time i've written this, so yea, i have no idea if it's even remotely good anymore. if nothing appears, then i'm sorry, but i give up at that point.




I don’t expect you to understand me,
I don’t want to force you.

I love you, I want you...

To feel every part of my body with those beautiful hands that you have,
And find a new place to put your tongue.

To feel you... to want you...

Don’t leave me please,
I need you now.

Make me cry,
Make me bleed,
Make me get down on my knees.

I’ll do anything,
Please just stay!!
I need you baby,
So don’t delay,
To come knocking on my door,
When you know no one's home,
I’ll let you inside,
So come right on in,

I hear your whisper in my ear,
"Quiet or the neighbors will hear…"

But from that voice,
I get louder and make more noise,

You call me a slut, and a whore,
But I don’t care,
Just touch me more!!

You’re touch is like ecstasy,
I need it now,
Don’t stop baby.

I love you, I want you, I need you!!

Even though you dont feel the same,
And even though this might be a game,
I love you



 

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Copyright 2009 Shadow_Kissed5180
Published on Tuesday, October 27, 2009.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: My heart breaks for you...

  • A former member wrote: thats actually really good. :]

  • Shadow_Kissed5180 On Sunday, November 1, 2009, Shadow_Kissed5180 (24)By person wrote:

    thx

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