i've been picking my nose.

By AniDayz




in the eyes of his voice
speaking catatonic
tongue
forming
triangles
of sentences formulating a thought
borne of experience + wisdom ... or something
else.
gather
in the crook of
such
intermediacy mingling like a guitar in tune with footprints of nitetime air in the bend of
conversation glowing as a star on fire

i heard him in is reverence and saw him in his undressings.

or
did i.

maybe
as i
held her hand fingering mine inside
the caverns of this perforation we are unfolding as i
unfold
mine

and standing at the bar,
two dread.heads
elbows deep to the world spinning of noise and voice
leaning in
to the cold wood and brew smells brewing out.back

i told him i was letting it unfold and seeing
where it goes
like origami
but the opposite
he asked me
norigami
is what we

decided on calling it.


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© 2009 AniDayz
Published on Saturday, June 20, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: sounds a wee bit regretful in its falling downness. . .its.. .. . but always been a pleasure to read your words. . .how they trip on the mind's implosiveness. self.discovery mixed with a drink or a dirge or two. ..

  • ALBATROSS On Saturday, June 20, 2009, ALBATROSS (194)By person wrote:

    Very intriguing method of describing existential concepts. The idea of searching for answers and words to describe. I love the conversation in the context of night time creating a sort of spoor of footprints. Perforation and unfolding in regards to decoding experience are perfect comparisons. And coining "norigami" is quite crafty as well. And by the end you DID actually decide on something with another person wielding their own unique view/experience as well. You have quite a poetic affinity friend. I like your work, and I'll keep my eye out for more works. Excellent!

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