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To Capture Snowflakes
By TheUltimateOutlaw
He said:
“All I want is to stay here--
just like this;
Watching the way
the snowflakes
are catching in your hair.”
All I could do was smile—
even though
the snow was already
beginning to turn
To an ugly, icy
Rain.
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© 2009 TheUltimateOutlaw
Published on Tuesday, February 3, 2009.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "To Capture Snowflakes"
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On Thursday, February 19, 2009, Leith Plunkett
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wrote:
Love it. What a message. So much unsaid. Well done, clever piece
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A former member wrote:
i loved it, reminds me how nothing stays the same and how somthing may be beautiful but after a while it turns sour.
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On Wednesday, February 4, 2009, RubyXero
(484) wrote:
well very deep actually. at least you gave the smile knowing the foreboding outcome nice piece
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A former member wrote:
amazing. ~ hdb.
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A former member wrote:
wow. I loved this. the way the weather changes and nothing ever stays the same. this is perfect.
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