Capsize

By TheUltimateOutlaw

I’m just as capsized
If not more
Than you thought
You knew

I would be.

Don’t rock the boat,
You said so calmly.

Such poise

Such simplicity.

I'm shocked.

Because this boat sank
A long time ago

And you watched

Bow snap from stern

And you were there when

The life rafts sunk,
And failed beneath the waves

And riptides pulled

Harder
And
Faster

Then anyone ever

Imagined.

So maybe you’re just surprised

That I’m still

Treading water?

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© 2008 TheUltimateOutlaw
Published on Monday, November 3, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Alanarchy On Monday, November 3, 2008, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    I love that word, "capsize". Capsized. Sounds so pretty when said aloud. Underscores the hurt here. Alot of really tastey lines, that just sound good read out loud. Dig it. Good to see your name on the works list again.

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