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And Oh My God....
By TheUltimateOutlaw
A shatter
And a moment
And work in 5 hours
And no cigarettes
And oh my god
What am I doing here?
I’m waiting for an opportune moment
To disappear
And disappoint
And failing
To have the patience required.
I’ve been
Shattered
For days.
And breaking down
For weeks
And yet I keep
Trudging through?
And I don’t know
How?
Much longer
I can
Keep
This
Up.
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© 2008 TheUltimateOutlaw
Published on Monday, November 3, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Monday, November 3, 2008, Leith Plunkett
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wrote:
Not sure if this was intential, but the way the last 5 lines get smaller toward the end of the poem really added to the way this reads. This really captures the last few years of my life until I could no longer keep it up. Powerful write.
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A former member wrote:
*scratches another hash mark* yeah im with you there. until the end, my way or other wise, nice write. ^_^
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