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kamikaze me
By disposable
i find myself obsessing
his kind words go a long way
they fill my eyes
and give me tunnel vision
and thought
for just
him
like a moth to flame
im drawn until my wings begin to singe
if i had known
there would be such a light there
i might have tried to look away
i could have stood a chance
had i any warning
but he was there
sweet and unassuming
with patient hands
and a half empty heart
one raised eye brow and small smile
and i had no choice
but to chance it
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© 2008 disposable
Published on Friday, October 10, 2008.
Filed under:
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2008, thelostmessenger
(112)
wrote:
o my. i love the part when you said 'if i had known there would be such a light there i might have tried to look away'... this is my favorite. i deeply connected with this write. ahh... such sweet simplicity love is.
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A former member wrote:
Guess the safest option is to not roll the dice,...but what fun would that be!...really feel as though without 'chance' theres no reward,..seldom do amazing things fall in our lap, i try never to hate the player,.. besides i love the game way too much.
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On Sunday, October 12, 2008, HonestMistake
(7) wrote:
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On Saturday, October 11, 2008, Leith Plunkett
(239) wrote:
What a sweet, sweet poem. I loved the opening presentation also, ending with just the word (him), it really emphasised the importance. Nice write :-)
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On Friday, October 10, 2008, heroineyes
(113) wrote:
i liked it...reminded me of a friend
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On Friday, October 10, 2008, skully
(43) wrote:
I like this and relate, 'I might have tried to look away'...if only
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A former member wrote:
Allegedly, moths aren't drawn to flame. They are blinded by the light.
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On Saturday, October 11, 2008, disposable
(105) wrote:
even more appropriate evolve, ty for the tidbit.
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