Tintanglia
By palenoble
Once upon a time
She knocked on my sub-conscience’s door
An unknown variable from chaos theory
Inaudible, unseen
Lingering in gossamer lingerie
Behold!
(tong-tied, tingling)
It’s SHE, Tintanglia, Môn Cherri!
忸忹怋幝ਦ忹发含叄摂恚咢忸忹怋幝ਦ忹发含摂恚咢
She is both
And she is not
She came here for you and me
She appears to be
The universal remedy
Mostly black though sometimes white
For one minute Jekyll, for a few years, Hyde
We share my body and my mind
In a peculiar way ostensibly intertwined
The most flexible ballerina on thoughts’ stage
Twisting her torso around, around, around
And then when she breaks, in rage
Our face with speed of light smashes the ground
We get out of our porcelain cage
Just to find nothing profound
O_o
Another interesting thing though I found;
Slugs are just hobosnails
Don’t blink!
For you may miss something that isn’t even there
Comments on "Tintanglia"
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A former member wrote:
the bit about the slugs derailed me for a second, but only in a good way...this was a wonderful trip :)
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On Wednesday, January 14, 2009, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
wow...there's an incredible depth to this that i just want to dive into and taste...this makes me smile at the same moment it gives me shivers at the same moment it pierces...its beautiful...thankyou for sharing*
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On Saturday, August 30, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(287) wrote:
I really like this--wonderful fantasy feel to it. Love the flow and the use of language. I'm curious about the name or word Tintanglia--the only reference I could find online relates to a dragon?