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Paulina,
By palenoble
It was a cloudless, moist night
The prerequisite for a day
In which wind, shades,
Breath and mind are still
Now and then, here and there
An asteroid plunged down from pitch black heaven
Committing suicide
Thus giving us a split of second
Lasting chance
To wish for something petty
You were my desert flower
And I was sand
Stroking your petals with
Gossamer touch
Whilst stars were the only audience
Do you remember?
***
We both knew that
I could have never become the person
We both wanted me to become
Take care
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© 2008 palenoble
Published on Saturday, May 17, 2008.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Like an unexpected meet that was faultless, and when the sun-rose and a new day dawned, you felt as though you could never match 'the night that was'
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On Sunday, January 4, 2009, palenoble
(47)
wrote:
your comment is better than the write :)
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On Sunday, May 18, 2008, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
quietly aching and melancholy... the images and feel read easily and flowing for the sadness it held at the end... well done
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