reborn to love you again, and again
By GoldenLotus
love me till the stars in your universe die
lie by my side as we decay into infinity
smear my ashes upon your lips
in your favorite color lipstick
you loved to kiss
when i’m gone, if before your last breath,
by your side i’ll haunt
till the day of your death
love me more tonight than this morning
lie by my side as we rot into eternity
smear your ashes upon(what’s left of me)
the memories of what we'll forever be
death cannot part our soul
i enter no where without you ,if love my only sin,
reborn only to find you again
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© 2008 GoldenLotus
Comments on "reborn to love you again, and again"
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A former member wrote:
Very beautiful
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
simple and lovely.
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
*would die to hear words like this
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus
(47) wrote:
i've died over and over to love like this again...glad you liked it bella!
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Agreed
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Ending was realy superp. I'm glad I read this. *Makes a mental note *GoldenLotus* *
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus
(47) wrote:
always a pleasure monkey...to have comments from you!
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
lovely write. i loved the line... "smear my ashes upon your lips"...beautiful. this was beautiful. the last line was a perfect ending.
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus
(47) wrote:
thanks for the awesome comment!
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, denver nitze
(251) wrote:
you should offer kleenex with this. *sniffs* beautifully put.
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, zanewill
(82) wrote:
excellent!!! makes me sad. i lost my love but it never leaves>>>
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, i tremble
(29) wrote:
amazing.
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus
(47) wrote:
thanks...glad you liked!