reborn to love you again, and again

By GoldenLotus

love me till the stars in your universe die
lie by my side as we decay into infinity
smear my ashes upon your lips
in your favorite color lipstick
you loved to kiss

when i’m gone, if before your last breath,
by your side i’ll haunt
till the day of your death

love me more tonight than this morning
lie by my side as we rot into eternity
smear your ashes upon(what’s left of me)
the memories of what we'll forever be

death cannot part our soul
i enter no where without you ,if love my only sin,
reborn only to find you again

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© 2008 GoldenLotus
Published on Tuesday, February 26, 2008.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Very beautiful

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Mylissa (845)By person wrote:

    simple and lovely.

  • Bella Butchery On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    *would die to hear words like this

  • GoldenLotus On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (47)By person wrote:

    i've died over and over to love like this again...glad you liked it bella!

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Agreed

  • Dancing_Monkey On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    Ending was realy superp. I'm glad I read this. *Makes a mental note *GoldenLotus* *

  • GoldenLotus On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (47)By person wrote:

    always a pleasure monkey...to have comments from you!

  • RubyXero On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, RubyXero (484)By person wrote:

    lovely write. i loved the line... "smear my ashes upon your lips"...beautiful. this was beautiful. the last line was a perfect ending.

  • GoldenLotus On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (47)By person wrote:

    thanks for the awesome comment!

  • denver nitze On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, denver nitze (256)By person wrote:

    you should offer kleenex with this. *sniffs* beautifully put.

  • zanewill On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, zanewill (84)By person wrote:

    excellent!!! makes me sad. i lost my love but it never leaves>>>

  • i tremble On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, i tremble (29)By person wrote:

    amazing.

  • GoldenLotus On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (47)By person wrote:

    thanks...glad you liked!

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