Vanilla, Strawberries And Tchaikovsky
By Guillotine
"Somethings come between us, my love" she whispered;-
As we laid amongst the stars of our pride,
"Something insidious and solid as bedrock" she murmured;-
While we slept amongst our hypocrisies.
"And somehow, I find I must debate every night we spend,
Curled within our dreamscape."
"Seems our spark has gone, diminished as a romantic's rose"
I devoured it;-
Thought upon it;
"Something about us, too intermittent,
too inter-missionary,
- rekindle this spark!"
And so we shuffled our heart and positions;
"Succumb down to my deepest core" - I exhaled,
And like a voyeur, watched my existence swallowed;
- I wet my lips;
Conversation muffled as she spread her inner-most self,
Choking my words with the sweet musk of her desires;
- catch breath, inhale!
Jaw, like glass,
Too many words stopped at the tip of my tongue.
No arguments, here.
My lapse in time to a rythmic heartbeat,
a thunderous ovation symphony as it crescendos,
. . . Climax!
(Tchaikovsky's 1812, a rapturous moment)
Cannon's fire, once, twice, I lost... count.
H.eartst.op
- catch breath, inhale!
exhale
"God should have stopped time for us," (soft.breath;finale)
Comments on "Vanilla, Strawberries And Tchaikovsky"
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On Sunday, September 30, 2012, Star
(879) wrote:
wow this is beautiful, and yet sensual... i love it well done here (:
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A former member wrote:
Maybe it's just me, and perhaps, I think it should be, but the females must be on your tail like all get out.
Excellent first read. I love the composure. Incompatibly uncompared.
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A former member wrote:
"like a voyeur" indeed.. .i feel i am intruding on the most intimate of exchanges; thoughtfully provocative in all the smallest ways, the ways that make every nuance of body and soul cascade and tremble. ..rush....and leaves the reader slightly lightheaded and openmouthed. ..or at least it did me [esp the 4th and 5th strophes]...nothing should come per se between . ...en vibrato. ..~nessa
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On Monday, March 10, 2008, thesuccubusreturns
(12) wrote:
as always im in awe of ur work. brillient
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On Sunday, March 9, 2008, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
I really enjoyed the thought you put into the content and format of this piece. Brilliantly done =) -Carl
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On Sunday, March 9, 2008, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
;-
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On Monday, March 10, 2008, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
P.S. Have you heard much from Colin since his Manc invasion of the land of Oz?
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On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
seems kinda like he did. nice.