Lackluster Luster
By glasshouse
He fathered my disease.
Dis.ease.
Un ease.
Uneasily breeding draftees.
Cirque de Sade -show for hire.
He feasted upon my wit,
My wet willingness to submit
Spread like legs
All over my fucking face.
…And I missed the way you taste…
And the way you tasted me.
I’m haunted by the owl
In the still lifeless tree,
Screaming relentlessly.
Persistently. Interrogating me.
“Who? Who? Who next?”
What . exactly . can one expect
And where can one expect to find it?
It’s got bars and locks
And a pack of dogs behind it
And I’m inclined to decline,
Turn around and unwind.
I’m not the kind of lackluster lust-er
That cums to mind,
Easily.
And I missed the way you taste……..
And the way you tasted me.
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© 2008 glasshouse
Published on Monday, February 11, 2008.
Filed under:
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Comments on "Lackluster Luster"
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A former member wrote:
i do not understand you at all. but there is something ther that makes me love it. very interesting
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On Tuesday, May 6, 2008, Anoblechicken
(38) wrote:
wow this is an amazing write
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On Tuesday, February 26, 2008, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
i really liked this. very interesting. you have a unique style
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On Tuesday, February 19, 2008, Idle Monkey
(10) wrote:
I read this one a few times. Each time, a different part stuck out. I really dig the owl "Who who who" part.
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On Wednesday, February 13, 2008, Dommi
(95) wrote:
I loved this piece, it has a resonating feel to it, a longing, if you will. awesome write, jes.
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On Wednesday, February 13, 2008, What Limes
(54) wrote:
good rythm and fantastic imagery.
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2008, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Sexy. The tospy turvey rhythem really created a noir-esque aura throughout the whole thing. I really dug this one.
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A former member wrote:
i really liked the feel of this -its heavy, haunting, caustic and cutting with some wicked images -also loved the 'bars and locks and a pack of dogs..' excellent write.
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2008, freudian-slip
(236) wrote:
i've got bars and locks... i liked that part alot. g
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On Tuesday, February 12, 2008, Niemand
(355) wrote:
Wow, this was really good!
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On Monday, February 11, 2008, Liz
(265) wrote:
hey jess, you're a good writer