Log In
Untitled
By Syringe
Tell me
What do you think about at night
(I won't tell a soul)
Pathetic and feeble is your middle name
I’ll attack you like a lion in search of its prey
Subtlety is surely not my specialty
Pussy-out is positively your expertise
"Would you like another?"
Why yes, certainly
Anything to sustain your disdainful appetite
Such a large man
But where are your balls?
Hmm...i guess they
d i s a p p e a r e d
Who gave you permission
To invade my demeanor
You’re an Intrusion
You’re depleting right before me
The pulpit that stands your ground is being
Desecrated by the ones you turned your back on
Do you lead or follow (or fall behind?…)
What a lonely soul who has played one too many games
You lose
KEAL OVER!
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
Ask the author first.
© 2008 Soulwax
Comments on "Untitled"
Log in to post comments.
-
On Monday, February 25, 2008, denver nitze
(256)
wrote:
agreed. very nice piece.
-
On Friday, February 1, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(359) wrote:
Hmmm I liked it too, picturing it in a relationsnhip scenario. I like how even though we invite them into our lives (usually because we're blind) they can still be "intruders". I liked the imagery, well written
-
On Wednesday, January 30, 2008, Narcissa
(404) wrote:
Hmm... this reminded me of someone - oh yeah my ex! I really liked the play of emotion here :)
Syringe's Latest Works Feed
Join