Untitled

By Syringe

Tell me
What do you think about at night

(I won't tell a soul)

Pathetic and feeble is your middle name
I’ll attack you like a lion in search of its prey
Subtlety is surely not my specialty
Pussy-out is positively your expertise

"Would you like another?"
Why yes, certainly

Anything to sustain your disdainful appetite

Such a large man
But where are your balls?
Hmm...i guess they

d i s a p p e a r e d


Who gave you permission
To invade my demeanor
You’re an Intrusion
You’re depleting right before me

The pulpit that stands your ground is being
Desecrated by the ones you turned your back on

Do you lead or follow (or fall behind?…)
What a lonely soul who has played one too many games
You lose

KEAL OVER!

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© 2008 Soulwax
Published on Sunday, January 27, 2008.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Rant"
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  • denver nitze On Monday, February 25, 2008, denver nitze (251)By person wrote:

    agreed. very nice piece.

  • Echoes of Orpheus On Friday, February 1, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus (357)By person wrote:

    Hmmm I liked it too, picturing it in a relationsnhip scenario. I like how even though we invite them into our lives (usually because we're blind) they can still be "intruders". I liked the imagery, well written

  • Narcissa On Wednesday, January 30, 2008, Narcissa (391)By person wrote:

    Hmm... this reminded me of someone - oh yeah my ex! I really liked the play of emotion here :)

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