Deep thoughts

By D3ADT0WN

I try my best, Everyday
But the results are always the same
I don't know why i'm so easy to break
I dont know how much more of this pain i can take

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© 2007 Ezimo
Published on Monday, October 29, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Ashteroth On Sunday, February 8, 2009, Ashteroth (192)By person wrote:

    Man, you should rewrite this into a full length song. It can see heaps more going with it. Short but good. ~ Ash

  • Bella Butchery On Monday, October 29, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    ... by jack handey... sorry, i couldnt resist.... besides the pun set up, i do feel empathy for the place you are comming from, been there way too many times... hope things get better

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