that feeling?

By GoldenLotus

do you ever get the feeling
that life hates you
in the cruel moment that sanity
is shaken from your grip

thieves and liars
never tasted
so sweet
so sweet,the revenge,
with every sip

do you ever get the feeling
that life has no justice
that the meanings we create
and the truths we tell ourselves

only replicate
lies already told

violation never hurt so badly
and the tears swelling up in my eyes
never felt so empty

stolen
my passion
silenced
my pictures

freezing the frame
just take me back to that day

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© 2007 JuNGaLiSTMiSTReSS
Published on Wednesday, October 22, 2014.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: *In the cruel moment that sanity is shaken from your grip* That crippled me doll...This is raw.. ~OttO~

  • GoldenLotus On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (47)By person wrote:

    my pleasure to cripple you...ty, for your comment.

  • lajeeves On Wednesday, August 29, 2007, lajeeves (46)By person wrote:

    Ive felt this! but have you ever got the feeling so true and blesed as love and trust and compassion and faith. this I now feel each day, and life is good

  • GoldenLotus On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (47)By person wrote:

    i have...i do...this was inspired by getting my camera stolen out of my car...it was my medium for most of my creativity..and they stole it, damn them.

  • A former member wrote: nice work. enjoyed the sentiment. i always liked seeing things from anothers perception

  • GoldenLotus On Wednesday, February 27, 2008, GoldenLotus (47)By person wrote:

    ty:)

  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, August 2, 2007, Bella Butchery (696)By person wrote:

    my daily routine... well, well put

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