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Gray Divides
By Equinox Asylum
No gloom looms more dismal than I
I am gray
Melancholy to the fray
Juxtaposed between dark and light
The phantom fog between black and white
Gray divides
I commiserate in multi-shade
Far beyond the blue
Painted by the shadow maid
Lost between me and you
My value is gray
Melancholy to the fray
Troy Allen Bull 8.01
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© 2007 Troy Allen Bull
Published on Friday, July 13, 2007.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Gray Divides"
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On Saturday, July 14, 2007, Err0r
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wrote:
Haha. I read it with the eeyore voice in my head too. This is good stuff here. I also like your use of 'Juxtaposed' Fascinating. Great write.
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On Saturday, July 14, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(423) wrote:
Until the last line...I was feeling rather Eeyore-ish. It would go great in his slow low voice. It seemed to roll nicely together.
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On Saturday, July 14, 2007, Equinox Asylum
(140) wrote:
Who the fuck is Eeyore?
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A former member wrote:
Winnie The Pooh character...the 1950's epitome of an Emo kid...I hate Eeyore..
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A former member wrote:
lol..I read this again with Eeyore narrating between my ears, and it sounds even better!
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A former member wrote:
some seriously interesting word choice going on here! good stuff :)
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