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Forever is not endless
By Spiritus_Frumenti
Forever is not endless,
In the same way that love is not peace
By the manner in which life hands you truths
so overly crushing and bleak
Everlasting could not be,
In worlds where clouds conceal the sky’s intent
Blown by winds made entirely
of what moves every soul’s descent
Immortality is not what is survived
after our dreams decay
By the ruins of our whispers
By the places where our buried hopes are kept
Always hurts because pain feels timeless,
Like there’s nothing more prolonging
than a wound in our hearts,
Nothing more eternal
than a suffering that ends a life forever….
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© 2007 Spiritus_Frumenti
Comments on "Forever is not endless"
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A former member wrote:
you always seem to point out the beauty in the breaking...or at least the breath of hope of beauty, somewhere; timeless, classic, etched. .. . amen.
.ness.
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On Thursday, February 8, 2007, jack paper
(126)
wrote:
this one gets me thinking.... hmmm so deep, and sad... very good write
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On Thursday, February 8, 2007, soul dancer
(96) wrote:
Exquisite...that's all I can say.
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On Thursday, February 8, 2007, Sin
(1168) wrote:
you paint sadness so vividly..like pastels strewn on a black surface, making the bleak beautiful, much respect ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
i love this poem...its so cool
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On Thursday, February 8, 2007, Mylissa
(845) wrote:
wonderful flow...this is beautiful.
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On Thursday, February 8, 2007, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
"Immortality is not what is survived after our dreams decay".. these words are so full of truth and wisdom, written so eloquently. Nothing seems to last forever, other than pain. Very well done, I love this.
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