I Want it All

By LOKI

A hard days work
and the day it is through
Going home to an empty bed
this is getting old
I dont know what Im gonna do
I want for something long forgotten
am I a man or a fool

I want to scream
I want to cry
I want to celebrate my life
But,life is hard
it gives you scars
and breaks you down with time
I want to live
I want to love
I want more than enough
I want this dream
I want that life
I want it all before I die

But,Thats just me

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© 2006 LOKI
Published on Wednesday, November 22, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: We all go through this pain of want and love in our lives. Love is a powerful thing. We all fear of dying alone but we still need to live life to its fullest. Nice write.

  • LOKI On Wednesday, November 22, 2006, LOKI (164)By person wrote:

    Dying alone terrifys me

  • A former member wrote: You want it all before you die. Nicely Worded:-) I think we all want and need this before we die. My Biggest fear is dying alone and dying a nobody. I want to be known before I die :-) Like I have said to many people,

  • A former member wrote: Don't swet the bull shit(Work) Don't let anybody be important enough to bring you down. ][ ][

  • LOKI On Wednesday, November 22, 2006, LOKI (164)By person wrote:

    your right thats why I love this place and.Its like my new home Thanks aunty

  • Aunty Depressant On Wednesday, November 22, 2006, Aunty Depressant (434)By person wrote:

    I do not think you are alone here sweety;)Be grateful for what you got when you can muster it, and keep on truckin!

  • LOKI On Wednesday, November 22, 2006, LOKI (164)By person wrote:

    Another Repost I changed the title this time though LOKI

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