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I Will Always Bleed Ink
By Fading_Smile
In order to live
our hearts must bleed
mine drips for the darkest angel
Do you doubt the taste of sorrow?
Scarlet and black will always make the latter
I painted my world nonetheless
and prayed for some shade of red
Tracing your portrait in the lonely shade of darkness
standing in my own shadow,
hope encompasses insanity alone
The veins of this colorblind poet
will always bleed ink
When "I miss you"s on every canvas
still cannot capture these feelings
a tear is worth one thousand pictures
What's a dead body worth?
everything when it's my own
You were everything
Do you doubt the taste of sorrow?
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© 2006 Fading_Smile
Comments on "I Will Always Bleed Ink"
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A former member wrote:
you know what? i may now just be addicted to your words. BEAUTIFUL!
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On Saturday, October 21, 2006, Mari
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wrote:
i just though something. leaving comments is like a graffitti tag to show ppl youve been here and had something to say. well anyway your tagged. oh and i like your poem
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A former member wrote:
Truth in every word, and you made those words flow like the blood you descibed. Beautiful! ~Silver~
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On Wednesday, August 30, 2006, BroKen-GlaSSHeArT
(69) wrote:
jesus, how do you do this to me everytime???you make me feel it, the sorrow, the rage, the everything. damn you
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A former member wrote:
Hot damn. I could be quoting you for the rest of the day if I tried to pull out the lines that made my heart skip. Indeed you have found something here. `Div
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On Saturday, August 12, 2006, Morbid_insanity
(75) wrote:
Thats really beautiful. you write so magnifecently. your words carry to the corridors of the soul. excellent write. ~Josh
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On Wednesday, August 9, 2006, mywristshurt
(408) wrote:
another beautiful piece.. and the title just captures the reader and the poem forms into something extravagant nonetheless.
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On Wednesday, August 9, 2006, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
beautiful. the only advice i have for you is to fix up this one stanza--the one that begins 'now living'...it just didn't seem to fit quite right to me. if you don't mind cristism. the rest, my darling, was astounding! ~lauren~
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A former member wrote:
beautiful. "do you doubt the taste of sorrow?" absolutely killer write. i like you more each time i read you.
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A former member wrote:
So much depth in the simple beauty of your words.
and you fucking get it!!!! (ask later:)
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On Wednesday, August 9, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(670) wrote:
"this colorblind poet" wow Blake, that line was incredible! You continue to leave me in awe of your words. Julia~
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On Tuesday, August 8, 2006, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
*The veins of this colorblind poet will always bleed ink" Very cool.
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A former member wrote:
"Do you doubt the taste of sorrow?" not when you've covered every inch of this write with it. Beautifully done. ~*Beth*~
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