Rape The Cross {revised}"erotika
By WinterGrave
Candle light dance across your skin
your body lies helpless glowing from the moon
devine sight, you look at me in asperation
i look back in vicous antisapation.
lust fold on the edge
the edge of this is sharp
finger the blade
as the razor does its work.
"Like a moth drawn to flame
I am vary much the same
for vingence on creed
resputed threw this savige deed"
{I contort my vice, drawn threw your advice
you begged for this pain, now scream in vain}
This is my carnality
my perversion my profligacy
look at me god, your son
.~.~.~.~.~.~.
Promotion, an incision
for throat to navel
nipple to nipple
a crimson cross burn in scarlet flesh.
with suppressed aggression
the sweet smell is blinding
as my mouth roams over the wound
I succumb, filling my mouth with your blood.
passion at hights, passion i feel
I draw back, head down i tongue your wet cunt
piercing moans issue
red liquid mixing with your candy swill
in darkness of demented love
i sepulture your soul
in the most unholy passion
in the most violent fashion
in vain Porn star action
EXODUS .... ORGASM!
My dark seed i spill
on top your chest
on the bloody gash
I rape the cross
I carved in your flesh.
Comments on "Rape The Cross {revised}"erotika"
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On Wednesday, October 22, 2008, Winter Born
(169) wrote:
"I rape the cross I carved in your flesh..." awsome ending to such a visual piece.. carnality and pain, desire and revulsion... Such a beautiful combination you have hammered out here... Faved.
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A former member wrote:
very nice and beautifully perverse...my kinda poem!! ~DC~
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On Wednesday, March 19, 2008, Celeste0224
(2) wrote:
wooow... i love it...
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On Monday, February 26, 2007, DarkLord
(7) wrote:
That is an incredible work!
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A former member wrote:
...fucking brilliant, damnit!
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On Tuesday, March 21, 2006, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
Kinky.... I love it. ~*~tart~*~
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A former member wrote:
This is my carnality..my perversion..my profligancy OMFG you rock!!! And the ending...all I can say is I fucking love this poem. please keep writing. Lost
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On Wednesday, May 11, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Oh hell yeah! Now this is just plan ... awesome
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On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, Green-eyed Raven
(54) wrote:
oh my... I dont know what to say... wow... Sexy. *Raven*
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On Sunday, February 13, 2005, Dei
(665) wrote:
perverse... sickening.. extream. So intense. insane rythm. this was amazing!
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A former member wrote:
this is good and deep....
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On Thursday, November 4, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
This is awesomely perverted.. excellent write.. -Michael
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On Thursday, November 4, 2004, DarkWolf
(415) wrote:
P.S. run a spell checker on this and it will be even better.. just being helpful.. you may now delete this message :) -Michael
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On Friday, October 29, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
*stunned* this was .. woah! i spine is frozen with all the repeated chills this inflicted on me.. the last stanza was like an atomic explosion in my face....
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On Friday, October 29, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
wierd... i dont know what to think really...