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I Was Just Wondering...
By Midnight Shadow
Every time it rains,
Are you shedding new tears?
When the sun goes down,
Are your eyes closed yet?
As times moves slowly by,
Are you moving as well?
If I could feel your arms around me,
Would every minute feel forever safe?
If I could gaze into your golden eyes,
Would it be like looking into the sun?
Whenever the wind moves through the trees,
Are you whispering in my ear?
If I feel the sun's warmth on me,
Am I in your thoughts?
As I move about the shadows,
Do you stand in them watching over me?
If I could find you within all my unhappiness,
Would you be considered a miracle?
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Copyright 2004 Midnight Shadow
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On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, DarkWolf
(415)
wrote:
Excellent write.. such questions.. very good work.. I like the way you present this one.. so many questions.. -Michael
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A former member wrote:
*smiles* a wholesome piece.
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On Wednesday, September 1, 2004, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
My eyes are silver...and scary. Methinks no one feels safe around me...But oh well. S'not a miracle, just love...~Mikey
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On Thursday, September 16, 2004, Midnight Shadow
(67) wrote:
Silver eyes are no less than golden ones...you look into them and see, not the reflection of the sun, but a reflection of the moon, full and bright in the midnight sky. ~Tracy
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On Tuesday, August 24, 2004, Zara Synn
(57) wrote:
Everything on this site seems to sing to me tonight. =)
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On Friday, July 30, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
A sense that you're safe. It makes you picture someone who is so in control. There for you, radiant ^_^ I love your writing
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
excellent...i really enjoyed this one
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On Tuesday, July 27, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
Beautiful...awesome write...I love this because i can relate kya
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On Monday, July 26, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
love your work midnight & again always thear you talking with your heart.. your works are just like songs.. never stop.. your friend matt..
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On Saturday, July 24, 2004, ShadowFlight
(105) wrote:
Feeling lonely lately? Or reading my mind again (please close the door when you come in so the air-conditioning stays inside). I think it's going around. You write with a powerful combination of compassion and empathy
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On Friday, July 23, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Thats very beautiful, I haven't quite read a poem like this one before, very original. Lovely write. ~Kirsten~
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On Friday, July 23, 2004, elisa
(1616) wrote:
when we reach the 'absolute' alone...it's almost like everything comes to life. Not everything has a face but everything speaks. A beautiful ponder:)
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On Thursday, July 22, 2004, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
i like this, i love how it ended w/ a question.
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On Thursday, July 22, 2004, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
I don't really detect any warmth here, just the cold reality of a joy now lost
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On Thursday, July 22, 2004, lonelygurl
(5) wrote:
when i read this i think of a gaurdian angel sitting there protecting me....very good
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On Thursday, July 22, 2004, Northstar
(375) wrote:
*smiles* wow the warmth in this one radiates--I can feel it from here
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