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By Exodus
Its okay if you make me hurt more
Its fine
Give me more of a reason to end it right now
I hate it
Everyone says the same thing
“Oh you’re nice when you want to be”
I’m not enough for anybody
You know I’m horrible just say it
I can take it
Even if it does take my life
I’ll try to be perfect
Just don’t hate me
Don’t make me cry
I never stop crying.
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Copyright 2004 Exodus
Published on Tuesday, January 20, 2004.
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On Thursday, January 22, 2004, Solace
(1069)
wrote:
"your nice when you want to be" I know exactly how that feels, apparently i'm insulting all the time. I never really noticed it but oh well. This poem reminded me of my best friend, are you her in disguise? hmmmmm ponders away...
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
You're something of a paradox... you can be incredibly sweet, but I've seen you rip throats out like no Doberman's business. I think "when you want to be" is what's giving you problems,
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
because that makes it sound like you choose not to be nice all the rest of the time... and that's just not true. I think what's happening when people say that is that they've seen the contrast,
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
and they're surprised by it and don't quite know how to handle it... you have a much stronger personality than most people are used to.
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
"Even if it does take my life/ I’ll try to be perfect/ Just don’t hate me/ Don’t make me cry" screams so much pain at me, it makes my toes curl... but you have nothing to worry about - nobody will hate you for not being perfect.
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, stormtalk
(729) wrote:
Don't cry... there's no reason to... believe me, you have no reason to cry...
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A former member wrote:
Nobody is perfect. And nobody should expect you to be perfect. The pain in this over powers the poem itself. I think you can be whoever you want to be. And one day you'll find someone who loves you for that.
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, Exodus
(172) wrote:
This was very much *spur of the moment*
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
whew! what a moment - your honesty is amazing - i've read your work , and so many like this one are like - thought transfers - really incredible - funguy
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